cm0002@lemmy.world to Lemmy Shitpost@lemmy.world · 18 days agoAlmost made itlemmy.mlexternal-linkmessage-square18fedilinkarrow-up1493arrow-down14
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minus-squareitslilith@lemmy.blahaj.zonelinkfedilinkarrow-up3·18 days agoMaybe “even if your bowels are ripping, never in the break go shitting”? It’s still a bit clunky, but the meter works and the grammar is technically correct I think, even if an inversion is unconventional
Maybe “even if your bowels are ripping, never in the break go shitting”?
It’s still a bit clunky, but the meter works and the grammar is technically correct I think, even if an inversion is unconventional